The Eleventh Commandment

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© Bailey Cooper
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She hears his heavy breathing in the dark
His footsteps coming closer down the hall
She's so ashamed, she's daddy's secret love
She wants to cry, she wants to die, but he can't get enough

The bruises on his face will go away
Mom keeps him home from school till they fade
She's sorry he was born and tells him so
He takes it in, he hangs his chin, he ducks another blow

Did God overlook it
What ought have been written
The eleventh commandment
Honor thy children

He cries for hours, cries and never stops
He shakes so hard his little cradle rocks
He'll never have the chance to be brand new
He'll never walk, he'll never talk, he's addicted too

Did God overlook it
What ought have been written
The eleventh commandment
Honor thy children

Thou shalt not kill
Thou shalt not steal
Thou shalt not take the Lord's name in vain
Thou shalt not cause thy children pain

God does not overlook it
What ought have been written
The eleventh commandment
Honor thy children
Honor thy children

~ Collin Raye ~

In the A House is Not a Home photo essay.

44 responses

  • John Stekl

    John Stekl said (12 Dec 2011):

    Bloody awesome!!

  • Ted Anderson

    Ted Anderson   said (12 Dec 2011):

    Really nice image.

  • James Wiley

    James Wiley gave props (12 Dec 2011):

    I think this is my favourite of yours so far Bailey. Exquisite composition, lighting, contrast, expression and mood!

  • Bailey Cooper

    Bailey Cooper   said (12 Dec 2011):

    Thank you for your positive feedback. To Jim ~ These were my eyes for many years. My work often comes from the emotional scars and fear that was created in a house without doors.

  • Roy M. Gunnels

    Roy M. Gunnels gave props (12 Dec 2011):

    Une touche de Baudelaire, de Rimbaud une touche ... une image vraiment exquis qui coupe si profondément.

  • Leslie Hunziker

    Leslie Hunziker   gave props (13 Dec 2011):

    Fabulous!!!

  • JamesHarmon McQuilkin

    JamesHarmon McQuilkin   gave props (13 Dec 2011):

    A masterful capture--love it--balanced so well---this has quality in tone, detail, flow, and lighting. the contrast is magical; --symbolism abound

  • Shirley Valencia

    Shirley Valencia said (13 Dec 2011):

    outstanding Bailey..........................

  • sandra d'souza

    sandra d'souza gave props (14 Dec 2011):

    touched and moved...

  • Karin J. Burton

    Karin J. Burton said (15 Dec 2011):

    Wow...that is heart retching. Beautiful photo, very moving indeed.

  • Vin Weathermon

    Vin Weathermon   gave props (22 Dec 2011):

    Survivors need our support; thank you Bailey for your artistic message. Protect the children...

  • Marco Martinez

    Marco Martinez gave props (2 Jan 2012):

    Hauntingly powerful.

  • tania medina

    tania medina gave props (8 Jan 2012):

    Well composed! Powerful eyes!

  • Sonia Adam Murray

    Sonia Adam Murray gave props (10 Jan 2012):

    Amazing and powerful. Such a telling photo and it goes so well with the words.

  • missy corrales

    missy corrales gave props (11 Jan 2012):

    as a survivor of child abuse I applaud you for addressing this topic. if more spoke about it maybe we could end it!

  • Mark Rosenbaum

    Mark Rosenbaum   gave props (9 Mar 2012):

    Great B&W...very interesting photo.

  • Roxana Brivent-Barnes

    Roxana Brivent-Barnes   said (10 Jul 2012):

    There is no more words to add!

  • Lynn E. Harvey

    Lynn E. Harvey   gave props (11 Jul 2012):

    COMPELLING!

  • Davide Simone

    Davide Simone (Deleted) gave props (25 Sep 2012):

    Awesome !!!!

  • ROCIO GUILLEN

    ROCIO GUILLEN   gave props (8 Dec 2012):

    Excellent image!

  • Michele Wambaugh

    Michele Wambaugh (Deleted) said (19 Jan 2013):

    FAB!

  • Susan B. Griffith

    Susan B. Griffith said (20 Jan 2013):

    Very emotional and intense capture.

  • Charlena Cavender

    Charlena Cavender said (20 Jan 2013):

    I too was a victim until I left home at 16, but have so much guilt leaving my siblings behind and out of 7 there are only 3 left. You can never be the same no matter how hard you try, but what I believe that makes us stronger is we know and feel each child's hurt and fear that we read about or see in the news and we as adults do not turn a deaf ear or blind eye, we take action because we see ourselves. Beautifully done!

  • Charlena Cavender

    Charlena Cavender gave props (20 Jan 2013):

    Very well done.

  • Bailey Cooper

    Bailey Cooper   said (20 Jan 2013):

    Charlena ~ It is such a pleasure to meet you and to read your words. We all need each other because of 'our' sameness, No one can truly ever understand the impact and ripple effect unless they've lived it. It defines me and, many days, it controls me. However, all of that can be channeled into avenging those who are living this now. Antenna on and full up. We have their backs. Thank you for your ability to say it out loud. There is healing in that action.Thank you also for the time you've taken to read and comment. It is appreciated.

  • Barbara Thurlow

    Barbara Thurlow said (20 Jan 2013):

    I'm another survivor. I have never known what the word "family" really means.... Thanks for this wonderful post, Bailey.

  • Bailey Cooper

    Bailey Cooper   said (20 Jan 2013):

    A pleasure to meet you Barbara. There are so many of us. It is far more common today to speak it out loud. When this was happening in my family, lots of people knew but it was never addressed. It was excused. It always makes me smile when I meet someone who has lived this. That means we ARE talking and we are DONE hiding. Thanks for your feedback darlin'.

  • John Linton

    John Linton gave props (21 Jan 2013):

    MonochromatiCool entry.

  • Elsa Mein

    Elsa Mein gave props (21 Jan 2013):

    Wow! Wonderful post!

  • satom chhim

    satom chhim gave props (14 Jul 2013):

    OMG i love the poem. Striking image!

  • Iam Leery

    Iam Leery gave props (14 Jul 2013):

    very moving .. t/u

  • Tim

    Tim gave props (24 Jul 2013):

    powerful image

  • Leslie Hunziker

    Leslie Hunziker   gave props (25 Jan 2014):

    back to vote.

  • Michele Wambaugh

    Michele Wambaugh (Deleted) gave props (25 Jan 2014):

    Back to vote! oxo

  • Deborah Downes

    Deborah Downes   gave props (29 Jan 2014):

    The most potent combination of image and words I've experienced. This explains so much. Cuts to the core, yet at the same time overflows with strength and hope. You show this time and again through your words and your images. In my book this makes you a winner in the deepest sense.

  • rekha nag

    rekha nag gave props (30 Jan 2014):

    What a powerful image!! Fantastic job Bailey!! Voted!

  • Daniel Martin

    Daniel Martin   gave props (31 Jan 2014):

    Bravo! Very touching poem and superb photo... God bless you all poor children who went through such pain... Namasté

  • David de London

    David de London gave props (31 Jan 2014):

    Thought provoking to say the least.(and understood so very well) Well done. voted

  • Thad Zajdowicz

    Thad Zajdowicz   gave props (4 Feb 2014):

    Powerful -- voted

  • John Linton

    John Linton gave props (4 Feb 2014):

    Oh YEAH! Rad!

  • Carl Kuntze

    Carl Kuntze gave props (7 Feb 2014):

    A little washed out, but dramatic. Elusive meaning.

  • Howard Tenke

    Howard Tenke gave props (21 Feb 2014):

    Love the play of light!

  • Saroj Swain

    Saroj Swain gave props (23 Feb 2014):

    wonderful shot

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